[Dozer523]

Whew Back, babe. Sit, sit, can I get you something, Perrier? Did I say I'd get right back to you? I did didn't I? Do I lie? NO I do not. Trust me. Have a Cigar.

Love it Babe, Love You. I’ve had my people look it over and as I said we love it. I did say “I love it’ didn’t I. Sure I did. See you can trust me. We need to make a few changes. Little one, you will hardly notice them.
First, way too many SEALS. And his name has to be Jim. Since that is where you will find him before and after every op. But, that will sell to the ladies lots of no-shirt-iron-pumping.
THE AIRPLANE DRIVER has to be a GIRL! She has to be beautiful in a no-nonsense-but-perky-innocent – Young Meg Ryan – way. She can be an AF grad too. But her back story is she was an “ugly duckling”. But she made herself look that way so the Male cadets would leave her alone. She did this because her DAD is a retired Special Forces Master Sergeant who popped up occasionally at the campus (or whatever you called it, babe . . . Still with me?) And would threaten to beat the crap out of anyone who went near his darling daughter (Including the Lesbians) This will be a GOLDMINE! Tension, family angst, humor appeals to the Teenage girls and Wannabe Dads. Ohmagawd! Now, she has to be beautiful. But Smart . . . She can fly anything in anyone’s inventory! OH WAIT . . . But she can’t navigate to save her life (you are going to love this!) so . . . she taps a different friend (And what do you think the friend looks like? See where I’m goin’ with this?) to plan the route with her! (Lots of “leanin’ over the chart table” shots!) Gold, babe, just gold!
This is just in prelim babe. And I really do know a great Story board artist. Have your people call my people!

OH OH OH Ohhhhhhhhhhhh! And this! you Got to get SAM from "BURN NOTICE" (Lift him right out and put him in this). You NEED a good "Outside-but-still-connected, Inside-the-System" operator. Pink Floyd has never been more right!